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September 8, 2012
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oh my God! :faint: What is it? Daily Deviation? REALLY? DD?!?!?!1111 oh :happycry: thank you so much ^DistortedSmile !! :heart: LOVEYOU!!!
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Given 2012-09-28
Excellent crop and eye contact. Enclosure by =Arichy ( Featured by DistortedSmile )
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Hello, I'm participating in #FeedbackFrenzy contest 02

My first impression of your piece was really emotive because in my opinion the theme represented here a strong direction of the eyes are directed to "Us" I loved that :) because it's captivating.
The chose of black and white was interisting too because we can focus more in the contrasts between the bars (vertical) and the whole set that is from behind as the model too. we can see that this picture have so many graphic values like textures in the model costume and shadows especially in the area of Bedlinen. I loved the way the hair is because it looks so natural and and the petals fall upon the model enrich the same naturalness. It creates almost a paradox between the idea of being "closed" and freedom conveyed by nature.

Regarding to the technical aspects : in my opinion i thkink that you did a good job on focus and perception because the center of the atention it will be for the face and bars. i loved the model expression too. To improve i think that you could highlight a bit more contrast in the shadows to accentuate more the face according to the surrounding environment (but if you have not a artificial light because if so I take that back) And i can see a a little of your hand ... perhaps her position should also be studied better because that way i think that loses some relevance to be "half hidden"
A sugestion :This is just an ideia :D ... you could you put the petals in the original colour and you keep the rest of the image black and white ... I think it would create a effeito have some interesting detail with color.

well i hope that could help you :hug: Thank you for sharing this amazing piece!
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KPEKEP Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
Это красиво )
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Arichy Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
спасибо, очень приятно :love: 
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KPEKEP Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
always welcome как говорят )))
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Shadowluver-16 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Student General Artist
WOO GIRL- YOU ARE LOOKING- SEXYYY!
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Arichy Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks:D
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Shadowluver-16 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Student General Artist
Yw <3
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DismayedSense Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Whoo! Congrats! :clap:
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Arichy Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you! :3
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tlcolor Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
Хорошо!.. Интересное композиционное решение. Даже некая драма присутствует. Можно красивый текст по этому фото писать.
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Arichy Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Спасибо! Мне очень приятно)
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